História sobre a cidade antiga mortal em Marte

8

Quando eu era mais jovem, eu li uma história em um livro antigo, que eu acho que era sobre turistas que viajaram para uma cidade antiga em Marte. Acho que um deles pode ter sido um astronauta, mas tenho certeza de que nem todos foram. De qualquer forma, quando chegam à cidade, eles se separam e pelo menos um deles é morto pela cidade. Eventualmente, um deles percebe o perigo (acho que foi o astronauta) e os sobreviventes mal conseguem escapar. Acho que foi de Ray Bradbury, mas não conheço nenhum detalhe concreto e não me lembro do nome.

EDITAR: Definitivamente não é "The City", de Ray Bradbury, tenho certeza de que nem todos na expedição eram astronautas. Eu acho que cada turista tinha uma certa ocupação. Eu acho que um turista era um caçador, outro era um poeta, mas não me lembro de mais nada.

    
por Hyperdrive enthusiast 15.09.2017 / 00:03

2 respostas

"Cidade Perdida de Marte" , uma novela de Ray Bradbury , publicado pela primeira vez em Playboy várias capas .

. . Eu acho que foi sobre turistas que viajaram para uma cidade antiga em Marte. Acho que um deles pode ter sido um astronauta, mas tenho certeza de que nem todos foram. . . . Eu acho que um turista era um caçador, outro era um poeta, mas não me lembro de mais nada.

Aaronson ran his finger down the printed guest list.

"An actor, a beautiful woman who happens to be an actress, a hunter, a poet, a poet's wife, a rocket captain, a former technician. All aboard!"

On the afterdeck of the huge craft, Aaronson spread forth his maps.

"Ladies, gentlemen," he said. "This is more than a four-day drinking bout, party, excursion. This is a search!"

He waited for their faces to light properly, and for them to glance from his eyes to the charts, and then said:

"We are seeking the fabled Lost City of Mars, once called Dia-Sao, the City of Doom. Something terrible about it. The inhabitants fled as from a plague. The City left empty. Still empty now, centuries later."

"We," said Captain Wilder, have charted, mapped and cross-indexed every acre of land on Mars in the last fifteen years. You can't mislay a city the size of the one you speak of."

"True," said Aaronson, "you've mapped it from the sky, from the land. But you have not charted it via water, for the canals have been empty until now! So we shall take the new waters that fill this last canal and go where the boats once went in the olden days, and see the very last new things that need to be seen on Mars." The rich man continued: "And somewhere on our traveling, as sure as the breath in our mouths, we shall find the most beautiful, the most fantastic, the most awful city in the history of this old world. And walk in that city and—who knows?—find the reason why the Martians ran screaming away from it, as the legend says, thousands of years ago."

Eventualmente, um deles percebe o perigo (acho que foi o astronauta) e os sobreviventes mal conseguem escapar.

Parkhill shouted below. And Wilder was flying up, up along the wall, looking this way and that.

Everywhere, the sky was closing in. The petals were coming down, coming down. There was only a last small patch of stone sky to his right. He blasted for that. And kicking, made it through, flying, as the final flange of steel clipped into place and the City was closed to itself.

He hung for a moment, suspended, and then flew with the woman down along the outer wall to the dock, where Aaronson stood by the yacht staring at the huge shut gates.

"Parkhill," whispered Wilder, looking at the City, the walls, the gates. "You fool. You damned fool."

They waited a moment longer and listened to the City, humming, alive, kept to itself, its great mouth filled with a few bits of warmth, a few lost people somewhere hid away in there. The gates would stay shut now, forever. The City had what it needed to go on a long while.

    
16.09.2017 / 07:08

Partes de sua descrição são vagamente reminiscentes de "A Cidade" (também conhecida como "Propósito") ), uma pequena história de Ray Bradbury , originalmente publicada em Startling Stories , julho de 1950 (disponível em Arquivo da Internet ), que foi a resposta às perguntas antigas e Breve história sobre astronautas que visitam um planeta pela primeira vez que cheira e os prova e Livro ou conto sobre uma cidade vazia com armadilhas mortais .

O que combina: É uma velha história de Ray Bradbury sobre uma cidade antiga e mortal. Um membro do partido, o capitão, é separado dos outros; ele é o primeiro morto, e seu destino é descrito em detalhes:

A final test. The city, having listened, watched, tasted, felt, weighed, and balanced, must perform a final test.

A trap flung wide in the street. The captain, unseen to the others, running, vanished.

Hung by his feet, a razor drawn across his throat, another down his chest, his carcass instantly emptied of its entrails, exposed upon a table under the street, in a hidden cell, the captain died. Great crystal microscopes stared at the red twines of muscle; bodiless fingers probed the still pulsing heart. The flaps of his sliced skin were pinned to the table while hands shifted parts of his body like a quick and curious player of chess, using the red pawns and the red pieces.

O que não combina: tudo mais.

1. A cidade não estava em Marte, estava em um planeta extra-solar:

The city waited with its windows and its black obsidian walls and its sky towers and its unpennanted turrets, with its untrod streets and its untouched doorknobs, with not a scrap of paper or a fingerprint upon it. The city waited while the planet arced in space, following its orbit about a blue-white sun, and the seasons passed from ice to fire and back to ice and then to green fields and yellow summer meadows.

It was on a summer afternoon in the middle of the twenty-thousandth year that the city ceased waiting.

In the sky a rocket appeared.

2. A parte exploradora é composta por nove astronautas, sem turistas:

The rocket soared over, turned, came back, and landed in the shale meadow fifty yards from the obsidian wall.

There were booted footsteps in the thin grass and calling voices from men within the rocket to men without.

"Ready?"

"All right, men. Careful! Into the city. Jensen, you and Hutchinson patrol ahead. Keep a sharp eye."

3. Não há sobreviventes. Os corpos dos nove astronautas voltam para a Terra, controlados por máquinas alienígenas:

The incisions on their necks were invisible, as were their hidden brass hearts and silver organs and the fine golden wire of their nerves. Their was a faint electric hum from their heads.

"On the double!"

Nine men hurried the golden bombs of disease culture into the rocket.

"These are to be dropped on Earth."

"Right, sir!"

The rocket valve slammed.
The rocket jumped into the sky.

As the thunder faded, the city lay upon the summer meadow. Its glass eyes were dulled over. The Ear relaxed, the great nostril vents stopped, the streets no longer weighed or balanced, and the hidden machinery paused in its bath of oil.

In the sky the rocket dwindled.

Slowly, pleasurably, the city enjoyed the luxury of dying.

    
15.09.2017 / 07:10